in challenge 84 Words

The paper boat

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The world destroyed
I was alone
Sitting on the river bank
Thinking of new life…
And it was raining
Drops of the pain
Falling from my eyes
And from the sky..
I saw a lil paper boat
A tiny flower on it
But from where it came?
There must be someone
On the other side of river
Looking for the same as I
For new life…

-Arti Manekar

This poem is the quittance of yesterday’s mistake.

Miraclechallenge#5
The paper boat

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26 thoughts on “The paper boat”

  2. Hey Arti !
    Wow. This is a beautiful poem using the prompt image. The loved the line ‘Drops of the pain’.
    Congrats for completing the challenge No.5👏😃👏😃👏😃
    🏆
    Keep them coming more 😉
    And just make sure you use the format at the beginning of your poem or story with a pingback to original source. Rest all is good.
    And I appreciate your efforts.
    And today is the last date for attempting others challenges too.
    Yes! Every Tuesday,I post new writing prompts for a week for 5 variety of exciting challenges.
    From,
    Miracle 😇

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      1. You are welcome Arti!, love being at your blog and exploring your beautiful posts, will mind my appreciation for your work?

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