The world destroyed
I was alone
Sitting on the river bank
Thinking of new life…
And it was raining
Drops of the pain
Falling from my eyes
And from the sky..
I saw a lil paper boat
A tiny flower on it
But from where it came?
There must be someone
On the other side of river
Looking for the same as I
For new life…
-Arti Manekar
This poem is the quittance of yesterday’s mistake.Miraclechallenge#5
The paper boat
Wow Wonderful AM!
What mistake?
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Thanks DJ.. Will tell u later…😊
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Ok will be waiting:)
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Thanks DJ…
Will tell u on wa
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Ok waiting
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Hey Arti !
Wow. This is a beautiful poem using the prompt image. The loved the line ‘Drops of the pain’.
Congrats for completing the challenge No.5👏😃👏😃👏😃
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Keep them coming more 😉
And just make sure you use the format at the beginning of your poem or story with a pingback to original source. Rest all is good.
And I appreciate your efforts.
And today is the last date for attempting others challenges too.
Yes! Every Tuesday,I post new writing prompts for a week for 5 variety of exciting challenges.
From,
Miracle 😇
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Thanks dear
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N next time I’ll try better…😊
Also will follow the rules n format..
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You are welcome 😇
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😊😊😊thanks dear
N I’ll try better next time..😊
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I’m glad to hear that. Keep your pen ready. New prompts are coming soon 😃
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Yes….ready for new challenges.. With a new day ahead..😊
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Yayy ! Will inform you, once I publish 😃😃😃
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Good one..
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Thanks..😊
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Hey Arti !
Good morning 🙂
Check out the latest writing prompts for Miracle Challenge Week -5 :
https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/miraclechallenge-week-5-dated-12th-july-2016/
I’m sure all the prompts are inspiring this week. 😀
All the best !
From,
Miracle 🙂
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Good morning dear… I’ll check it out…thanks for informing me…I’ll try it…😊
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Sure. My pleasure 😇
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Similar dream , i had been having since child hood , but was not capable to pen down it, you are simply beautiful
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Thanks a lot dear…😊😊😊
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You are welcome Arti!, love being at your blog and exploring your beautiful posts, will mind my appreciation for your work?
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I love the poem! It helps me to remember that I am not alone in the world . ❤😊
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That’s great…
Thanks…😇
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