एक तो मेरे घर पर
एक किराने की दुकान,
उस पर मेरी मीठी पड़ोसन
हाय! मुझपर वो मेहरबान।
हुई भोर और आयी वो
मेरी छोटी-सी दुकान पर,
मैं तो मलंग हो जाता हूँ
उसकी मधुर मुस्कान पर।
तेल, मसाले, चीनी, गुड़,
दाल, चावल
एक लंबी-सी फेहरिस्त है;
“भिजवा देना सामान घर पर”
कहती मेरी पड़ोसन
हाय!उसकी बोली बड़ी मस्त है!
दोपहर तक जो सामान न भेजूँ
तो उसका संदेशा आता है,
“भिजवा दो न जल्दी”
उसका लिखा हुआ मुझे भाता है।
बर्फी, गुजिया, मालपुवे,
खीर, हलवा, लड्डू, घेवर,
शाम को आयी मीठी खुशबू
फिर मेरी दुकान पर।
अब लगता है वो आएंगी
लेकर पैसे और पकवान,
मेरी बस एक इतनी अर्जी
मान ले ओ मेरे भगवान।
आठ बज गए, न आयी वो
न ही लाती पैसे,
इतने सारे सामान का मैं
अब दाम निकालूँ कैसे?
दिल तोड़कर मेरा वो
रोज खाती मीठे पकवान,
इधर उधारी के बोझ से
टूट रही मेरी दुकान।
फिर न आयी वो दुकान पर
हुआ प्यार का मेरे देहावसान,
अरी! प्यार न दे, पैसे तो दे
इतना कर दे तू मुझपर अहसान।
–आरती मानेकर
At a special demand, I tried my hand in comedy for the very first time…
Hope you guys will like it…
Comment must and let me know “should I write comedy too? “
Thanks. 😊
हा हा हा 😂
अति हास्यजनक
शानदार ☺
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धन्यवाद..।😅
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sweet
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Thanks..😅
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Hahaha .. Well done .. Write more and make us smile more 🙂
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Yes Di…thanks for ur precious comment..😅😊
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😘😘😘
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Do, do write humorous rhymes too. 🙂
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Yes…😊
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Haha hilarious 😂
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Thanks..😅
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ek no meri pyari padosan :p
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Thanks shubh..😊
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Arti Badia Likha… yeh kaha dekha tune…????
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Imagination..😊😅
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Imagination…. kuch toh dekha hoga eske sath ka …
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Yes..we had a shop at my home..😅
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Okays :))
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BTW thanks..
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wow aarti its awesome poem. Ek number. Meethe pakwan se mere mhu me paani aaya hehe lol…keep it buddy 😉
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Thanks buddy..😊😅
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Nicely done
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Thanks dear..😊
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My pleasure
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बहुत उम्म्दा
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Thanks
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Welcome.
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Nice dear aarti mja aa gya
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Thanks
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किराणे should be replaced with किराने.
Anyway good word work
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Oh yes…thanks.. Actually I mixed my language. Hindi + Marathi….😅😅😅
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10/10
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Awww
..really DJ.. Thanks a lot..😍😘
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Yes, main jhooth nahi bolta. Pleasure 😊
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😊
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Waah !
Mast likha hai Aarti 😄😄
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Thanks…😅
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Welcome (:
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Acchi h poem😀😊😊
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Thank you..😊😅
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Ur welcome😊
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आपकी हिंदी इस बेटर than इंग्लिश . धिस इस थे रीज़ोन यू गेटिंग मोरे कामेंट्स आन धिस पोस्ट ।
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Thanks a lot…😄😄
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Mast
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Thanks swapnil..😍😘
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Jyada mithi nahi he na varna daibitise ho jayegi.
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Nhi. Sugar free h…😅
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Superb
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Thanks..😊
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You are great in comedy , never read such a hilarious poem…lol
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Thanks…😇
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😊😊
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LOL!!
I loved this one!
Try more Aarti, You are a good observer. I bet you can see the fun side of everything.
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Thank you di..
I would try.😊
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Haha! Filled with humour.. Accha likhti hai aap 🙂
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Thanks dear…. welcome to my blog
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बहुत ही सुदंर आरती
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Thank you Manoj
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